My revision strategy is going to be one that focuses on organizing ideas correctly and analyzing the correct quotes, and adding in the information needed to support them. I spent a lot of time working on my thesis with my groupmates and it helped me out a lot actually. The way my thesis was originally structured showed a flawed set of ideas that lacked the ability to give the essay any real structure. My new essay’s thesis allows me give strong claim sentences and allow for ideas to flow of their backs. I also I have to work on my organization skills with my ideas. I have good ideas but the paragraphs don’t make any sense with their position. So i’ll be putting my essay under scrutiny in the way the ideas are positioned. Also my spelling and grammar were not the best in the world last essay only bc I did not take my time when editing and even writing, I am still trying to figure out ways to get around this. All of this will help me write and create a much better paper and help me get a better grade.
